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My Little Star

Twinkle twinkle my little star Oh look how beautiful you are Shining so bright for the world to see Lighting up the sky and smiling at me Twinlkle twinkle my little star I want to hold you so tight But your just to far So I'll wait each night Just to get a glimpse or two And when I reach heaven I'll be even closer to you FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE CONTEST

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2011 6:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Faleshia. Love Carol

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/1/2010 5:27:00 AM

Congrates on having your poem featured this week Faleshia well done love Jayne

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/30/2010 4:14:00 PM

I love this one too. I think I'll write my version.

Skat A

Date: 9/29/2010 9:01:00 AM

FALESHIA, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2010 5:25:00 PM

congrats on having your poem featured on the soup Faleshia...P.D.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 7:58:00 AM

Always a pleasure to read your poetry Faleshia. The best to you in the contest. I wish to thank you for your kind comments on my writings. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 6:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Faleshia. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2010 4:21:00 PM

Adorable, Faleshia! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/26/2010 3:17:00 PM

Congrats Faleshia on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend.. a nice one to share with us all today with luv...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/25/2010 5:30:00 PM

How sweet, Faleshia. Barbara will love this too. Best wishes in her contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/25/2010 5:19:00 PM

Awesome entry Faleshia... good luck my friend.. how are u doing? this is a super sweet piece luv.. enjoyed and we are always close to them..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/25/2010 5:08:00 PM

This is a sweet one, just like you! Light & Love and thanks for your nice comments

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/25/2010 4:04:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this lovely write that expresses your love of the heavenlies...I was delighted by your comments on my work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/25/2010 4:01:00 PM

Very nice rhming and rhymic poem you have composed, faleshia

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2010 3:04:00 PM

Faleshia, this is a very cute and creative version of your own, sweet as the real twinkle starsin any sky. Loved your poem nice rhyme,..p.d.