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My Little Star

Twinkle twinkle my little star
Oh look how beautiful you are
Shining so bright for the world to see
Lighting up the sky and smiling at me

Twinlkle twinkle my little star
I want to hold you so tight
But your just to far
So I'll wait each night 
Just to get a glimpse or two
And when I reach heaven
I'll be even closer to you


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  1. Date: 3/9/2011 6:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Faleshia. Love Carol

  1. Date: 10/1/2010 5:27:00 AM
    Congrates on having your poem featured this week Faleshia well done love Jayne

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 4:14:00 PM
    I love this one too. I think I'll write my version.

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 9:01:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 5:25:00 PM
    congrats on having your poem featured on the soup Faleshia...P.D.

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 7:58:00 AM
    Always a pleasure to read your poetry Faleshia. The best to you in the contest. I wish to thank you for your kind comments on my writings. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 6:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Faleshia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/26/2010 4:21:00 PM
    Adorable, Faleshia! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/26/2010 3:17:00 PM
    Congrats Faleshia on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend.. a nice one to share with us all today with luv...

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 5:30:00 PM
    How sweet, Faleshia. Barbara will love this too. Best wishes in her contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 5:19:00 PM
    Awesome entry Faleshia... good luck my friend.. how are u doing? this is a super sweet piece luv.. enjoyed and we are always close to them..

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 5:08:00 PM
    This is a sweet one, just like you! Light & Love and thanks for your nice comments

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 4:04:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest with this lovely write that expresses your love of the heavenlies...I was delighted by your comments on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 4:01:00 PM
    Very nice rhming and rhymic poem you have composed, faleshia

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 3:04:00 PM
    Faleshia, this is a very cute and creative version of your own, sweet as the real twinkle starsin any sky. Loved your poem nice rhyme,..p.d.