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My Little Girl Who Had No Clue

Mt little girl who had no clue lately when I look at you My heart wonders If your love holds true Your stares at other guys passing by In their Lexus BMW's and Limo rides Can't you see I love you For theres no other I swear this is true For my heart only belongs to you My little girl Who had no clue Come here girl Let me hold you Like I used to do Let me wisper in those ears I love only you Don't push me away For my heart will be blue My little girl Who had no clue I'm begging and pleaing For I know theres No other like you Come take my hand And let's say I do My little girl Who had no clue Another song working on Let Me know what ya think

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/2/2008 5:28:00 PM
This sounds wonderful. I really like the chorus part and how it reinforces the theme. I can see the images quite clearly and the pleading of love in this time and age. This should have excellent melody, harmony, and rhythm. I need my copy when it's published. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/30/2008 6:30:00 PM
it a write that is full of love and devotion, an unconditional love, great and powerful, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/25/2008 3:10:00 PM
Beautiful poem--sad and romantic, filled with hope and longing. I enjoyed reading this one very much. Keep writing poems such as this one. They share beautiful thoughts. Love, Pat
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