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My Little Detective

My Little Detective I saw and first heard It roared like T-rex and whistled like bird Underneath the wooden stand shall appear A finely built little boy wearing a crew cut hair Far away to the place I stayed He sometimes banished due to slow internet bandwidth Turned me into a blank thousand-yard stare I longed to hear his little jaunt pleasure He is a picture to reveal my happiness An allegory to tell my journey’s success If on a magical-intellectual land of puzzles can inhibit He is a boon to get me deep through the thicket A special break in winter, a moment so right Find the one who likes this color code #4E9258 Whose name is in this code: 16-9-15 14-15-5-12 Reveals a saint’s name and my name is involved Two factors, holy and first Christmas He is my love, my whole life to embrace His mother’s face, their likeness you will know Read the clue, line-by-line as you go His time so precious that I need to guard A super sleuth knows how to trap his bard Now I cracked the code, solved this riddle He is my little detective, my son “Pio Noel” September 4, 2015

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Date: 9/8/2015 4:51:00 AM
Kabayan Noel. a sweet tribute to your son!!! cute!~Olive ELoisa :D
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Noel Villarosa
Date: 9/9/2015 12:19:00 AM
He is really my inspiration in writing some of my poems here. Thanks, Olive for your sweet comment. (^_^) Noel.
Date: 9/4/2015 10:59:00 AM
Lovely write for your son, kabayan! hugs!
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Noel Villarosa
Date: 9/6/2015 12:19:00 AM
Thanks Kim for reading my poem. My son loves reading a fun detective mystery cases, even applying this in real life, one time he was trying to solve the missing chicks inside the cage. (^_^) Noel.

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