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My lil special guest

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My lil special guest

It popped 
in as if to say 
my birdie buddy all sweet and 
Dressed in a downy gold gown 
of yellow
I tried to cheep in tune, join its 
song to say
'welcome my chirping lil fellow 
Oh my it sang then like a 
feathered cello!

So Soupers hi and hello
and twitter tweet tweet
May you find this short 'n' 
sweet sweet
This was about my winged 
guest of honor
What shall I call her, Eileen O' 

(contest, 'sweetest touches of verse)

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  1. Date: 7/11/2013 4:59:00 PM
    Love it! Very sweet. Betty

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 12:47:00 PM
    Love this sweet poem about your little yellow bird. My Mom's favorite song was 'Yellow Bird. SuZ

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:12:00 PM
    Cute poem.

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 9:38:00 AM
    I enjoyed your poem and had a laugh too. Nice fun poem with good rhyme, as Im from Ireland the names Eileen and O'Conner are very common, Eibhlin is the Irish Gaelic spelling of the name....(pronounced EVELIN.)

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 10:43:00 PM
    Oh, yes, quite a fun poem to read!

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 6:57:00 AM
    hahaha!Zaynub, u entertained me by your work...who were they? the names you mentioned, very intriguing piece...Loved it really, GOOD JOB! welcome to Psoup, thank you for the visit!...Elai

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 4:07:00 PM
    S. zaynub, very clever rhyme! I love the flow. Hakim

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 11:56:00 AM
    love the rhyme pattern nice write thanks for coments on mine xxdavidscott

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 11:01:00 AM
    how sweet this is.. you charm me.. gotta check eileen... inviting piece..:) huggs

    Kamoonpuri Avatar S.zaynub Kamoonpuri
    Date: 6/28/2013 12:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi guys, i can't put my finger on where i heard dat name but it rhymed so i took it. I thought she was someone famous for i hav heard dat name often so i calld d canary bird after d name.:)
  1. Date: 6/26/2013 10:21:00 PM
    S. Zaynub, ha ha... your a wonderful guest dropping by... Is Eileen O Connor from the soup... a nice rhyme... xox~ LINDA