My Life's Mission

To scatter love where ere I go To love my neighbor as myself To love God even more than my children Won a no. 8

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/15/2011 3:05:00 PM

Hi Joyce,...this is as perfect a mission statement as they get. Congrats on utter perfection as tho spoken from the Master himself. Reminds me of the Sermon on the Mount!!! Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2011 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Mission Statement"contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 12/15/2011 11:40:00 AM

Just wonderful Joyce.Congrats on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/15/2011 10:56:00 AM

Congratulations Joyce

David Williams

Date: 12/15/2011 10:37:00 AM

Joyce congrats on your win, ..David

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/10/2011 5:52:00 AM

wonderful statement Joyce. harry

Kash Poet

Date: 12/10/2011 2:39:00 AM

Very nice mission here Joyce.You have a very kind heart.Best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2011 10:45:00 PM

Yours is kind of hard for me so I did an easier one!!! GOOD mission statement, Joyce. (now that i think of it, i guess it is easier to love God than ones own children, when I think how difficult those kids could be. haha)

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 12/9/2011 7:07:00 PM

Awesome Joyce! I LOVE the first line!

Nancy Jones

Date: 12/9/2011 5:28:00 PM

You sound just like my mom when I was little, is that not cool? Her mom taught in a one room schoolhouse. In fact, she taught the man she eventually married (and with whom she bore my mom) how to read. Aren't parentheses beautiful things? Have a great weekend, Joyce, namaste~N