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My Life's a Game

My life's a game **** has changed But time will tell My life has changed But will it be real If only I could see my life on the other side Because I've learnt that the grass is always greener on the other side If I could go back and change I won't feel so disengaged My heart plays a game My head plays a game But I never wanted my life to become a game I'm not ready to play I only just started But my life has already started the game I can't go out I feel embarrassed Embarrassed of what The life I can't manage For you to feel the way I do You would have to walk in my shoes But I'm afraid that you don't have my size shoe You don't understand You never will But time will tell My life has changed **** has changed But to you My life's just a game (This is my first poem, take it easy on me) 27/08/16

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2016 10:02:00 PM

Liam, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 7/27/2016 7:57:00 PM

Wise words enclosed in this poem Liam. Welcome to Poetry Soup.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/27/2016 8:59:00 AM

We all had to start somewhere Liam. It's a good start. Welcome to the soup and keep slingin the ink. Read all you can as there are many talented writers here. I learn everyday just from reading.

Skat A

Date: 7/27/2016 8:37:00 AM

Liam,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2016 5:35:00 AM

- A deep touching first poem but great written, Liam :) - Welcome to Poetry soup ! - Hugs from Norway // Sun :)