Home » Poems » Olivia Nimley » My Life Time Partner

My Life Time Partner

The crowd was so much Yet you found me The noise was very loud Yet you recognized my voice The road was so dark Yet you led me through I am happy you are my life time partner

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Gary Wayne Hill

Date: 6/19/2013 7:56:00 AM

Sometimes so much can be said in few words. To be content with one's life is all anyone can really hope for. Your poem made me smile and feel good about life.

Olivia Nimley
Date: 6/19/2013 8:58:00 AM

Thanks for the compliments.

John Ginesi

Date: 6/11/2013 11:01:00 PM

Olivia, Very direct and to the point, I would have liked a bit more on this poem as it seemed a little short of being great. John

Olivia Nimley
Date: 6/12/2013 3:02:00 AM

John, I am you had a bit of it. Love is the greatest healer.

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2013 4:40:00 PM

Hi Olivia, i am thrilled to have you as a friend....... and I have myself a life time partner, we are not always happy, but we are together.......... I am going to enjoy following your poetry............*Skat

Olivia Nimley
Date: 6/12/2013 3:09:00 AM

I mean love will do greater things foe you. just belive in it. Even if the rainbow surface be hopeful that your love will surely fall on the wings of a dove.

Olivia Nimley
Date: 6/12/2013 3:06:00 AM

Skat, will do greater for you,just believe in it. Even if the rainbow surface be hopeful that your will surely fall on the wings of love.

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/8/2013 12:30:00 PM

Wow! Such a concise and cool piece, this is a creative work. Keep it up!! Love hears the inaudible, sees the invisible and does the imposible! It's great to read your piece this evening Olivia, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. It's a platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. The pages has a lot of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke

Olivia Nimley
Date: 6/10/2013 1:57:00 AM

Hey Adeleke, thanks for the compliments. It's my passion to touch every heart positively with creativity.