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My Life Partner

oh my life partner, if you are the wings then i am the flight if you are the instrument then I am the sound of the instrument if you are the song then I am the tone of the song the shy eyes have been able to disclose what the heart was too shy to communicate to yOu You are the extreme limit of love I am only the begining as far as my feelings concerned the limit is the sky or the other limit is the earth- meaning what ever the issue All the considerations come to end on you- yu are the main focus of my life what ever it may be You are beautiful- prettiest of all But I am the pride of that beauty......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/20/2013 9:49:00 PM
Vinayak, . Congratulations, thank you for the lovely entry. Goodnight. Luv~LINDA
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Date: 11/14/2013 10:45:00 PM
Your writings have so much passion and emotion. The reader gets pulled in and can feel your heart and soul from beginning to end. Nice job
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 11/15/2013 12:58:00 AM
Thank You Robin means a lot... ~V~
Date: 11/11/2013 11:47:00 PM
lucky is your wife, let this love be permanently so long as lived, a nice write also enjoyed
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 11/12/2013 2:10:00 AM
M still a degree student actually...its dedicated to my girlfriend actually ~V~
Date: 10/8/2013 6:32:00 PM
Nicely expressed feeling of love and devotion ;}
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 11/12/2013 2:11:00 AM
thnk u Debbie
Date: 8/28/2013 10:23:00 PM
Hi Vinayak, Nice expression of affection here.. Ken..
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Date: 8/28/2013 10:23:00 PM
True to being a life partner... :)A~D
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