My Life Is Like a Coin

My life is like a Coin. When above man tosses and spins It,with all my pain.....! Can you catch my line? My life is like a Coin! When I spin a Coin Once I get head, I always say its mine. But if I get tail I will loose and fail! My life is like a Coin! Like that in my life , Once I get happiness, Once I get sadness It's not always fine, My life is like a Coin.! There are many up and down. Don't cry and moan, It will show once at a time. My life is like a Coin!

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James Horn

Date: 11/4/2017 7:19:00 AM

Oh, I meant like an open book.

James Horn

Date: 10/31/2017 4:42:00 PM

A coin also has a 360 degree complete circle. You can always coin in a phrase into a poem. This may be hard to bare; There never will be a perfect pair.

Silent One

Date: 10/27/2017 6:19:00 AM

Excellent... there are only two sides to a coin... I am sure you have a lot more depth..

Ananthasagaran Narayanapillai
Date: 10/27/2017 10:45:00 AM

Thank-you sir,your comments make me energetic and motivate me to write more poems