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My Life, As It Were

I am in love. Now pregnant. Getting married soon. Married now, having a baby. Long time for labor, stress, beautiful baby boy, home now. First week home, tensions run higher. Lots of fighting now. Wondering, if it's right.

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Date: 8/4/2011 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Dana. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2011 9:49:00 PM
Your simple and honest poem moved me, and brought back powerful, forgotten memories.
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Date: 7/25/2011 3:30:00 PM
seems to me this is somewhat like what my daughter said...everything backwards, but what a learning lesson...a lifetime to forward to...your writing is so on point....congratulations for having a featured poem...and thank you for your efforts, Rich
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Date: 7/25/2011 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dana. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/23/2010 4:42:00 PM
I know. I get that now. :)
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Date: 12/23/2010 4:40:00 PM
Introspective thoughts happiness and pain you have penned. But that's life. Dana
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