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My Life As a Caterpillar

I lazily stroll on a leaf, carrying my fatty weight with me, wondering how beautiful the butterflies are. They tell me that they were once like me, carrying their fatty weight like me, wondering how beautiful butterflies are. “To be like us, you will first have to stop a caterpillar, and thinking like a caterpillar,” they always tell me. I leave it to fate, to see how time re-designs me into a butterfly, decorating the spring air….. By: Teddy Kimathi In: Personify Any Animal of Your Choosing Contest

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Date: 1/28/2014 3:51:00 PM
Teddy, CONGRATULATIONS, a very clever write, you did well in "Personifying Any Animal of Your Choosing" *enjoyed every poem.......... ~SKAT~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/28/2014 11:46:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words SKAT A :-)
Date: 1/5/2014 1:01:00 AM
Enjoyed the personification and congrats on your win, Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/7/2014 7:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram Mehta.

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