My Life

1.Onboard Warming up, the weather In middle spring Grass dancing and larks singing ... Lilacs white, purple and mottle are walking on road 2. Going Home Road is really long Coach moves too slow The homing heart feels like either a flying goose or a flying arrow 3. Fly a kite My busy shadows chained Langfang ,Baoding and Beijing up into a triangle God saw and said : That looked like a kite The rope was the long thinking of Held in Mr Sydney's hand Note: My home is in Sydney while I am working in three cities in northern China

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/8/2019 9:23:00 AM

It is good to see a person’s starting point. My wife’s Chinese name is Mai Ha. I believe it means beautiful morning dew. Her dad has a poetic heart. Her family moved here when she was nine. They came from Hong Kong but her parents originally were from China.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/1/2018 9:33:00 AM

Xuefeng, your imagery is vibrant and full of emotion in your beautiful and captivating first poem posted here on PS. I admire your creativity and artistry. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 10/12/2016 11:33:00 PM

ni hoa, this is so creative. Congrats for it been featured. All the best. :)

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 10/14/2016 6:27:00 AM

Thanks for enlightening me. In Mauritius we say it but I've not written it before! Glad to learn!:)

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 10/13/2016 7:56:00 AM

"ni hoa" should be three Chinese words, Ni=you, ho=hao=good, should be the second word,while" a"="a", the third word,@_@)

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 10/13/2016 7:53:00 AM

Ni Hao(Chinese Pinyin,means How are you!@-@) Thank you so much for your positive comments! Best wishes to you as well! Take care!

Skat A

Date: 10/4/2016 7:44:00 PM

?:????,???????? Xuefeng Pan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 10/9/2016 8:19:00 AM

Dear SKAT, Thank you so much for you friendly welcome, I Just saw your words and made me feel very good! All Best wishes to you and your beautiful poems...take very good care of yourself and each other!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/3/2016 12:26:00 PM

???Xuefeng, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 10/3/2016 10:46:00 PM

Dear Linda if possible you could suggest some of your best pomes to me to translate them into Chinese versions, in fact I have translated more than 200 English poems into their Chinese versions.

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 10/3/2016 8:16:00 PM

Dear Linda, frankly I am only in the very beginning in writing English poems, I know I will learn a lot from you and many other excellent poets, I will do my best to follow your guys in loving with poems...best wishes indeed...take care!