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My Life

So here I sit with crumbs of my intellect scattered about Stupidity comes easily and I'm ugly and stout I cant find a friend that doesn't want something from me And I live in this dump and I'm just to lazy to flee My life is a mess and I spend lots of time in my bed My banks always calling cause my accounts in the red I drive an old clunker that's near out of gas My landlords complaining and giving me sass Other than that I'm doing just fine Don't you wish your life was as great as mine? For the Bad Poem contest..

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Colleen Bono

Date: 5/18/2013 1:05:00 PM

I like this one.I wouldnt label it a bad poem just the facts.Thank you for your offer to soup mail if you can help.I am just at a point I need to make a major decision and dont want to burden anyone.thanks again.take care

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/6/2013 8:24:00 AM

I like the last rhetorical line...Congrats on your win, Barbara~A.O

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/5/2013 5:48:00 PM

Not such a bad poem, but not such a good one, Barbara,, your poem is what it is! CONGRATULATIONS ;-) Thank you for participating in my worst poem contest. I don't know if I should call this an honor, but it has been something different... It's always a pleasure running odd contest. Take Care~ LINDA

Judy Konos

Date: 5/2/2013 3:17:00 PM

This is a fantastic poem....wow...thanks

Kash Poet

Date: 4/25/2013 8:52:00 PM

Very good bad poem here BG:) Enjoyed the read.