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My Last Wish

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This poem was dedicated to my beloved wife, my dear sister in one of my past lives.


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My Last Wish

If only I can ask the world
To gather all the love
Each person has.

If only I can feel the love
Free of inhibitions in some extent 
And share it with everyone.

If only I can be 
With the love of yours
So that I can have my last wish.

If you permits me to  live and die 
Unconditionally with and without you
Oneness reflected indeed.






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  1. Date: 4/12/2015 7:19:00 PM
    So pleasant to stop and read a bit of poetry this evening, thank you. Light & Love

    celestial Avatar marvin celestial
    Date: 4/15/2015 3:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debbie!
  1. Date: 12/26/2014 11:59:00 PM
    MARVIN, Congratulations -- This is a great way to end and start the new year, having your poem featured on the soups front page. Hope your Christmas was a merry one! Always & Forever ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 12/25/2014 3:09:00 PM
    That is a good wish hope someday it will happen

  1. Date: 12/23/2014 3:30:00 AM
    Beautiful,a fine write dear poet Marvin.Regards. -Safa

    celestial Avatar marvin celestial
    Date: 12/23/2014 4:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Great thanks Safa! Thanks for dropping bye!