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My Lagoon

Oh magnificent lagoon  
the wonderful rush of calm,
All my troubles disappear
as my dreams begin 

Oh beautiful waterfall
you are a scene from my dreams,
Such sparkle under sunlight!
gone when I wake up

Melani Udaeta
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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 9:21:00 PM
    Melani, this is sure nice!! Love that line: wonderful rush of calm. Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:15:00 PM
    Melani, , congratulations with your awesome win. SKAT

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:01:00 PM
    MELANI, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 12:16:00 AM
    Congrats on your placement. I love your dream. BG

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 5:27:00 PM
    Creative winning work..Enjoyed reading ..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 9:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on your happy dodoitsu and big win. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:31:00 PM
    Congratulations on your fantastic win, Melani! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Melani love xx

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 8:39:00 PM
    Melani, i like this image... the canvas here made me want to sleep under this beautiful sunlight. a good thing about dreams is, that you can go back every night.. if your mind allows... enjoyed... and good luck..pd