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My Lagoon

Oh magnificent lagoon the wonderful rush of calm, All my troubles disappear as my dreams begin Oh beautiful waterfall you are a scene from my dreams, Such sparkle under sunlight! gone when I wake up Melani Udaeta Natural Dodoitsu Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2013 9:21:00 PM

Melani, this is sure nice!! Love that line: wonderful rush of calm. Congrats on the win!

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2013 12:15:00 PM

Melani, , congratulations with your awesome win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2013 10:01:00 PM

MELANI, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/11/2013 12:16:00 AM

Congrats on your placement. I love your dream. BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2013 5:27:00 PM

Creative winning work..Enjoyed reading ..Congrats..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/9/2013 9:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your happy dodoitsu and big win. Love, joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/9/2013 2:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win, Melani! Always, Annalise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/9/2013 1:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning spot Melani love xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2012 8:39:00 PM

Melani, i like this image... the canvas here made me want to sleep under this beautiful sunlight. a good thing about dreams is, that you can go back every night.. if your mind allows... enjoyed... and good luck..pd