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My Lady's House

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My Lady's House

I leave the
fiction outside,
it belongs
with the cold.

Our friction 
makes a satisfaction
that condenses on

and the windows
weep for us.

I breathe in
the sweet smell
of wine-tinted

and heave heavy
a sigh.

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  1. Date: 9/21/2010 2:03:00 PM
    Your writing never dissapoints me, Hai. Great use of alliteration at the end. Excellent verse! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 12:49:00 PM
    Beautifully written free verse, your imagery is wonderful. I truly enjoyed your write. Caryl

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 8:21:00 AM
    Awesome verses, Hai Au Chu! "and the windows weep for us." Great expression! Enjoyed to read your verses this late afternoon! And thank you for commenting "Silent Nights". Just posted another poem on Soup. Have a great new week!...Gert

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 5:37:00 AM
    I am enjoying going through your work today.. I see your new here and want to wish you the best.. great write on your loved one...Your friend Michael

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 9:39:00 PM
    You know, Hai Au Chu this was not a good time that I read such a descriptive piece that is so fitting to how I am feeling right now. Trouble is, my love is miles away and I couldn't execute! Great piece though!! Didn't leave much to the imagination...well said. Joy (Jew)

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 9:26:00 PM
    richly descriptive piece with some interesting details of passion within,very well penned and I do want to Thank You for reading my words and leaving yours behind and no I am not 29 or been close to a beer you are right in your next comment,,my first 29 word thing,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 2:54:00 AM
    I knew by reading your critique of my poem that I was going to love your style....and so I do!!!! ;-)

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 5:54:00 AM
    Oh my! I had to read this one to my BF! We do certainly enjoy similar expression. Thanks so much, Hai Au Chu, for your positive comments and for putting your feeling to "pen" in here. All about those wine-tinted moans- tee heee!

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 11:43:00 PM
    Quite a lovely Poem showing your feelings of love and passion beautifully. Nice write and many thanks for your comments on Patradoot 37. It is great that you know Hindi. First few parts of Patradoot are also given in Hindi hope you would enjoy them. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Hai Au Chu.

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 4:55:00 PM
    a wonderful poem and gift to offer your lady in words, Enjoyed your poem,..p.d

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 3:38:00 AM
    Amazingly deep lines here. You write with passion. I like the imagery of the windows 'weeping'. Few words that say a lot. Great poem! Emilia

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 12:26:00 AM
    ooh. What a passionate write indeed...really liked how you say the "windows weep for us"-- nice imagery it gives-- and thanks for your comments in my poem-- that sure was awesome for you that you had time to breathe and compose yourself-- :) --nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 12:04:00 AM
    Poetic passion perfectly posed..... love it!

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 5:19:00 AM
    Ooh, a lovely passionate write! Very enjoyable! Love the last line. Hugs, Kris

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 3:25:00 PM
    The passion can sure steam up those windows. Beautifully written, Hai! Thanks for your comments as well. I look out for more of your work. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 3:05:00 PM
    Thanks for commenting on my poetry, I think this poem is superb, you have a gift, a gift for writing, that is amazing... love Constance

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 11:24:00 AM
    I saw you mention Dylan in your comment on Deborah, and said yes, another Dylan thomas fan. I came for that and found more ... a great writer on your own.

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 4:00:00 AM
    i like your write ,thank you for reading woman scorned ...that is about my partners ex she just wont let go ... even though there has been lots of time since they were a couple ... sarah x