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My Knight

Now your mine, as we share the same ink Quenching my thirst for loves refreshing drink Letting our words written tell our story Of a deep love and all its formal glory Your forever in my mind, you never leave Restoring my faith, see I now believe Resting inside me each day and night Your in my heart shinning so very bright Softly caressing my imagination Teasingly tickling my anticipation As you seduce my very thoughts My heart feels tied up in knots Sharing each other’s breathless sighs Patiently awaiting your whispered replies Intoxicating every ounce of my reserve Your deep voice echoing off my every curve Falling into each word you’ve spoken Making me feel like I am no longer broken Blessing star status you returned my lost light The shining armour that holds my knight July 24,2020

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Date: 9/4/2020 11:38:00 AM
Must have missed this -- but congratulations on being chosen to feature! I have to agree with Hannington on this one, Brenda -- extraordinary rhyming powers indeed -- Queen of the "Rhymers"! Lots of affectionate wishes! :) john
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Date: 9/1/2020 4:44:00 PM
Brenda, congratulations on having your poem selected as a Featured Poem, it is truly beautiful, well done, a FAV for me _Constance
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/3/2020 5:16:00 AM
Hey thank you! Much appreciated:)
Date: 8/28/2020 2:54:00 PM
Your extraordinary rhyming prowess left me gasping for more...the theme being a pretty hypnotizing one, and your taste-foreshadowing titling invitingly irresistible. Kudos!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/3/2020 5:16:00 AM
Thank you so much!:)
Date: 7/28/2020 12:39:00 PM
That's such an enchanting muse of glistening passion Brenda. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/3/2020 5:16:00 AM
Thank you! ;)
Date: 7/28/2020 11:50:00 AM
A Knight for his erstwhile Damsel
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/28/2020 11:51:00 AM
Thank you so much!;)
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 7/28/2020 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations Brenda
Date: 7/28/2020 9:34:00 AM
Such a lovely, romantic poem, Brenda-- a WINNER! Janice
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/28/2020 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Janice so much!:)
Date: 7/28/2020 2:33:00 AM
Congrats on your top win!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/28/2020 9:05:00 AM
Thank you I appreciate that!;)
Date: 7/27/2020 11:21:00 AM
Congrats Brenda on your 1st pl. win!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/28/2020 9:05:00 AM
Thank you so much!;)
Date: 7/26/2020 9:50:00 PM
Congrats Brenda on your win! This is so full of love! Beautiful!:)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/26/2020 11:15:00 PM
Thank you so much!:)
Date: 7/26/2020 6:26:00 AM
WOW! Wonderful romantic tribute to the knight, my friend--your words inflame, Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/26/2020 9:02:00 AM
Vijay thank you so very much! I really appreciate your comments and the read!;)
Date: 7/25/2020 5:45:00 PM
This is so good Brenda, knight in shining armor what every princess deserves!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/25/2020 5:53:00 PM
Thank you so much John! And yes what every lil girl dreams!;)

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