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My Kiss From Heaven

When i first met you and you walked past me it was love at first sight When we met again i thought you are mine When you proposed me in the crowded corridors all i could do was blush and blush And when you took my lips as your possesion all i could do was drown in the passion As you and i luxuriously explored the grooves in each ones lips .... And now, when i kissed you all i could feel was the numbness of your lips the unresponsiveness shattering me casting a shroud on our million dreams... All i could do was to wish that i was born earlier.. so that i could live with you longer The lid of the coffin closed burrying the memories of my first and last kiss together....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/31/2015 9:26:00 PM
so sweet
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Date: 8/7/2013 3:10:00 AM
Oh no such a sadening poem, is it fictional? Whateva it is its splendid lovely! Pls read my latest poem too.:)
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Date: 7/30/2013 12:04:00 AM
what a tragic poem, a kiss gone cold, a heart long gone, but memories still lingers. touching
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Date: 7/28/2013 8:42:00 AM
Wow,,,,, this is a true tear jearker I thought the numbness of your lips, meant the relationship had, failed never thought it was death....very touching & sad, very unique write shreyas...I do enjoy your poetry. Thankyou4sharing:) peace & blessings cherie....
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Date: 7/26/2013 3:40:00 AM
Hi Susy! Why did you have to end it that sad? I love your poem, it is very emotional all through. It explores all the feelings of any reader. Sorry Susy if really this happened - My friend Neelam just tried to convince me this morning that we most times write about circumstances we have been in, I pray this is not the case here. Great Susy!
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Date: 7/24/2013 8:44:00 AM
I didn't expect this kind of ending. This threw me for a loop and held onto my heartstrings very deeply. Excellent job!
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