Get Your Premium Membership

My Juliet

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Isaiah Zerbst.


Juliet - William Clarke Wontner

Thou art to me the fairest crimson rose, A tender bloom with dawn's first colour gilt; Yet ev'ry flow'r in mortal clime that grows, Is here for but a time, and then does wilt. By all I e'er held dear, I now aver, That though a rose may wilt, yet still 'tis sweet; I only hope a place I could secure In fondest adoration at thy feet. For fairness found in form and face will fail, But that within the heart may shine undimmed; Though nothing for youth's beauty may avail, A heart with golden deeds may yet be rimmed. My Juliet, in truth I do declare, I love thee not for youthful beauty fair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/16/2016 3:21:00 PM
So lovely to see your wonderful sonnet featured on soup today. Hope all is well with you I Sarah hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 7/31/2014 7:05:00 AM
Shakespeare could have composed this poem. Nicely done !
Login to Reply
Date: 3/9/2014 11:43:00 AM
Well done. I'm amazed and daunted by Shakespeare's sonnets and those who follow the practice. If alive today, I think he'd have a franchise "Sonnets for us"
Login to Reply
Date: 3/7/2014 9:01:00 PM
Nicely penned sonnet and congr4ats on the win, isaiah
Login to Reply
Date: 3/7/2014 8:36:00 PM
Wow, and wow.! congrats on your wonderful success. BG
Login to Reply
Date: 3/7/2014 6:05:00 PM
hey, there you are again and with one of the top FAVORITE sonnets that Karen chose for her contest and book!!. WAy to GO, such an honor, and congrats to you.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/7/2014 5:27:00 PM
A classic, Isaiah! I don't think this style will ever die. I just find it more elegant than modern poetry. Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2014 3:42:00 PM
hey, I just found one I never read yet!!! Your own Juliet poem!! the message of this sonnet is PERFECT and it flows beautifully!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/30/2014 5:31:00 PM
Very great poetic quality..The competition is stacking up..I like the Old English style..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 1/29/2014 1:26:00 PM
I declare this romantic beauty a favorite : )..Lovely to read 'you' again.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs