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My Journey Home

The spirits stand before me to guide me on my way To a place so peaceful that I would like to stay I'll be on the wings of eagles soaring through the skies While all my friends and family say their last goodbyes I am the bear gone fishing for everlasting life Until I am reunited with my children and my wife I hear lots of animals running through this eternal land As they have come to greet me and take me by the hand The wolves lay here beside me somewhere beyond the moon As I wait for my family to come and visit someday soon And I shall go on hunting for the place to lay to rest Beside my loving mother in holy blessedness I see the gates of our great spirit as I start drawing near And send lots of hugs and kisses to those I hold so dear I'll be on my journey home somewhere past our great sun So I'm sending loving spirits to all my beloved ones by Deborah Lynn Gale with deepest sympathy to Native, David Welch

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Date: 4/30/2024 1:24:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/11/2016 10:27:00 AM
Deborah, awesome poem. LINDA
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Date: 7/20/2010 2:22:00 PM
I would like to thank everyone for the comments on my win in Catie Linsey's contest. Very much appreciated
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Date: 7/19/2010 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations Deborah on your well deserved win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fast and Fabulous". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:20:00 PM
Very nice, and a big congrats to you on your HM. LUv,Andrea
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Date: 7/18/2010 9:52:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Catie's fine contest Deborah with this touching tribute >> James
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Date: 7/18/2010 9:26:00 AM
Nice to have a win so quickly..congrats to you..your friend (?) surely would have loved this. BG
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Date: 6/1/2010 8:29:00 AM
very niice poem you have here!!..lots of beautiful images painted in your words..thanks for checkin out and commenting on my writing!
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Date: 6/1/2010 1:16:00 AM
Thanks for my comment on my poem.I really like this one esp the line The wolves lay here beside me somewhere beyond the moon very good sarah x i have only just joined myself so i will put you in my fav poets so i can read your work x
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Date: 5/25/2010 4:47:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Deborah. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2010 12:02:00 PM
Excellent write, Deb. Very sad, thoughtful and loving. Thanks for your comments. All the best, Ralph.
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