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My Jar of Stories

I have kept all my stories, since the day I was born Safe in a jar, some new and some worn I will pour out a few, to use as my muse When the light bulb denys me, or my pen has no use Battered, and chipped, and dusty with childhood Filled to the brim with my plans and my schemes Losses and triumphs, friendships and kindness Goals and ambitions, are mixed with my dreams It is fragile and slippery as a wet bar of soap I have stored all my heartache, and mixed it with love I have poured in some worry, with the good and the bad My jar holds my stories, from the day I was born ............................... For Susan Burch's Contest: " Jars"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/1/2012 6:27:00 PM
This work makes it sound so easy to to craft a touching poem, and I mean that in the most complimentary way. I'm glad to have found it.
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:29:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie x
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Date: 1/29/2012 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2012 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations, Carrie. A meaningful poem, I always enjoy poems bout life and its complexities :)
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Date: 1/29/2012 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations on winning with this fine entry. Great use of words Carrie.
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Date: 1/28/2012 7:30:00 PM
Yes, I remember this winning poem. Congratulations, my friend!
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:53:00 PM
carrie congrats on your win, keep em safe now ..David
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:24:00 PM
congrats Carrie on a splendid win for this creative composition on jars theme luv..
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:14:00 PM
Nicely done Carrie. Very much enjoyed. Congratulations
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Date: 1/21/2012 5:01:00 PM
you did jar of stories and I did jar of life. It is very good we both did metaphors, which is what Susan wants! I enjoyed this, Carrie. Sure wish you could see movies with me.
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Date: 1/20/2012 3:55:00 PM
Very Good!
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Date: 1/20/2012 2:44:00 PM
Very moving and touching write Carrie! I really enjoyed your poem this evening! I liked the idea of stories within the jar! Great relationship! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/20/2012 2:34:00 PM
Smile ˜ I Remember Back Around 1981 When I Wrote My First Ever Handful Of So Called Poems Including, "I Am & House Of Marble" * I Wrote One Titled, "Discrepancies Kept In A Jar," My Dear Wonderfully Beautiful Carrie ˜ I Love Your Beautiful Poetry & I Am Quite Certain That Your Beauties Lifes Jar Holds Much More Brightness Than Gray ˜ My Love to You Always, John!:) *
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Date: 1/20/2012 2:27:00 PM
Amazing...(pl visit Susan's contest page)
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