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My Husband a Dog and I

At the Sunset Strip Mall after doing our groceries We are eating our ice cream cones in the parking lot When a white van pulls up beside us A driver gets out to do his food shopping His little black an white dog sticks his head out Wages his little tail then wines for ice cream We were happy to share our treats with him The dog was pleased and so were we.

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Date: 6/8/2017 12:17:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, it s reall cute that first of all how you treated the dog well and secondly how you enjoyed your life with your child still inside you however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/8/2017 1:55:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. Yes I will read your poetry.We did feed this dog ice cream and the dog enjoyed it. Thank you.
Date: 10/6/2016 3:28:00 PM
This is such a great story!:) Funny how we turn into little children around dogs!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/25/2016 11:08:00 AM
Hello Chris, yes it is funny how we turn into children when we are around dogs. I think they relives our stress somehow. I also like cats. I look forward to reading your poetry.
Date: 8/20/2016 8:21:00 PM
Hi Denise, this is a very clever poem and very entertaining. Betty
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/20/2016 3:00:00 PM
Hello Betty so pleased you like my poetry. I look forword to reading yours.

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