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My Holy Love

You are pure, holy, Then the enchanted wind playful, Lapel You are astonished mind, you are trapped. When love is aroused, Happiness is like craving war, Awakened heart became awakening, Then free speech, Golden vines set, you are adorned, Love is wealth, you are pure, you are pure. ---sankalpmollick

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Date: 5/15/2020 7:23:00 PM
Happiness ... "like craving war." Sankalp, your poem has a new approach, lots of potential, thanks! Why is "Lapel" in Line #3 all alone, & what does it mean? I hope your Beloved knows you (as many Eastern men) like to bless their future brides as "pure women" who represent God's grace. ThanX again, Namasthe, Shalom
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