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My Hibiscus

Hibiscus Flower I planted When I was young,I Nurtured it till it grow, one Morning on my door step Step I find it chopped On the floor Afolabi 20/5/2015 Contest: Give me a sign Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/14/2015 4:46:00 AM

:( It's sad when something you have invested so much in is taken away like that.....cruel. Find a new flower to plant.

Michael Dom

Date: 6/14/2015 12:40:00 AM

Hibiscus - the red flowers with deep crimson centre - they can take a good cutting back when they're planted as hedges.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/21/2015 11:33:00 AM

tragic and scary pic...~ olive eloisa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2015 7:25:00 PM

that is sure not a good sign, poet!! To see your lovely flower chopped up!! Good luck in Nette's contest.

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 5/20/2015 10:23:00 PM

Thank You for take your to read and comment on my poem.