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My Hero

The moon shines down lighting the landscape as she beams with glee whilst dancing; gliding in and out of the clouds peaking. One moment there the next gone. From a crescent to a full circle as she controls the tides. She sees each season come in watches them go yet she remains. When I am feeling blue to her I turn and soon all is again well in life. Who can look at her high in the sky and not be touched deep inside. Oh yes if ever there is a hero it is you as you keep darkness back.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/30/2017 11:09:00 PM
A lovely write about the moon, Shadow! Well done!
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Date: 4/30/2017 8:06:00 AM
Hi Shadow: Great Write! You epitomize my wife's fasciation with our Florida moon. She has many instagrams.
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Date: 4/17/2017 1:13:00 AM
I appreciate your excellent idea. For contest I could have chosen out of the box. But I had my hero worship from very childhood. So I will go for that.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/17/2017 4:03:00 AM
your choice but it could cost you points meaning a lower placing hugs
Date: 4/13/2017 1:10:00 PM
You mirror much of my own admiration of the moon in this piece Shadow :) xomo 7!
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Date: 4/13/2017 12:05:00 PM
This was nice, the moon does have that power to make everything seem better.
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