My Hero

HAPPY MEMORIAL DAY DAD Your heroic efforts are treasured The amazing things you have completed The events could never be measured That the enemies are now defeated Your service makes you my superman I would like to thank you for it all I am as proud as anyone could stand Your picture will hang in the hall Now go on and enjoy your victory Never forget my head will be held high Knowing that you had made history It will just about touch the sky

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/3/2016 2:48:00 PM

Lori,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Lori Freund
Date: 3/4/2016 9:26:00 AM

Thank you. Anything you can say will be taken. Before you do just know I started this as fun I put them on fb away to deal you know. Any how any help will be greatly appreciated.