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My Hero

My Hero I played with a shy boy, when I was nine and he was ten. He had a big party and left the country then. His parents took him away, to the other side of the world Never to be seen of again, or to be heard. We talked about this boy that was nine, way back then. I remembered him for ever, even when I turned ten. I often wondered what had happened to him This scrawny shy boy, quiet tall but very thin. Seven years later; this boy came back on a ship He was almost a man still thin, but nice lips. He talked to me often and we became friends He really liked my sister, but we made amends. This boy, nearly a man asked me to go out I thought you liked my sister, So what’s this about? I thought I liked her, but I know she’s not true I think that I would rather go out with you. This boy nearly a man looked so sincere I agreed in an instant but, what did I hear? They say he has girls all over the place Oh well never mind, I had been in the race. I gave him the elbow after some time, I found then, that I missed this almost man of mine. He asked for me back, a pest he became, He asked for my hand, I thought that was lame. He promised me faithfully, that he would be true And he become my hero, I am telling you. He’s more than a man a giant in his heart, He still loves me dearly, We never shall part! He saved my life, in fact more than once So he really must love me, I took no chance. He stands up for me on every occasion This man I have loved since I was nine and he was ten.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/3/2015 9:23:00 AM
I agree with Tony's comment the first on this poem, from a guy that also could see something very special in you
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Date: 12/28/2012 8:31:00 AM
back here again, i'd like to know more about this,, Mandy this is a wonderful poem, took a while to sink in, but boy it is so good this....is!!!!!!
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Date: 11/15/2012 11:55:00 AM
Dear Mandy, Congratulations on YOUR well deserved Win in Kristen's Contest I have LOVED the same woman for 45 years it's good to see such LOVE still exist LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Date: 9/24/2012 3:28:00 PM
your poems hold one's attention so strongly, beause they are so good
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Date: 11/25/2011 6:28:00 PM
You are truly blessed Mandy.....love and happiness always!
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Date: 11/7/2011 10:55:00 AM
Mandy congrats on your win, fantastic poem..David
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Date: 11/7/2011 11:08:00 AM
Thanks David, nice of you to comment x
Date: 11/7/2011 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations I am sending you for your win in Kristen's "The Love of Your Life" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2011 6:52:00 AM
Thanks once agin Carol you are too kind x
Date: 11/7/2011 6:23:00 AM
What a beautiful story you told Mandy, incredibly special. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/7/2011 6:51:00 AM
Thankyou Jodie you are very kind x
Date: 11/3/2011 12:18:00 PM
* “I Love this Pleasant Everflowing Story * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Mandy * Tis the Kind of Love One Finds Amid Sweet Fairy Tales * Or Sitting Amid A Theatre Watching A Happy Endings Love Story * Leaving One Feeling Warm Inside & Full of Dreams * Beautiful * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/3/2011 12:23:00 PM
Thankyou so much for those lovely words, Sarah . may i say it was easy as every word is true.x
Date: 11/3/2011 8:56:00 AM
What a great story. You are blessed. Tony
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/3/2011 9:19:00 AM
Hi i know I am and I am very grateful for it as well. Thanks x

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