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My Hearts Whispering Bliss

Love is my hearts essence, shining Our love is perfect like a dream Walking hand in hand by a stream And my heart speaks of love burning The shadows folding around us Our kisses and words like stardust Without love life is not living The love within us immortal This passion is unchangeable Love for us is never fading Slowly, silently, now the moon The dawn dim that rose far too soon I rest in his arms trembling Words of love falling from my lips Tears from my heart's whispering bliss Love is my hearts essence shining And my heart speaks of love burning Without love life is not living Love for us is never fading I rest in his arms trembling ______________________ August 26, 2012 Poetry/Rhyme/My Hearts Whispering Bliss Copyright Protected, ID 08-416-325-26 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Can You Constanza (2012) Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich, Judged, 09/21/2012 8th place __________________________ Featured Poem Week of June 17, 2018

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/26/2012 5:55:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your super win in Andrea's "Can You Constanza" contest Constance. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/24/2012 10:04:00 AM

Constance , :-). Congratulations with your awesome winning poem in Andrea's "Can you Constanza?" contest. Love it, always~ LUV*PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/24/2012 2:15:00 AM

Belated Congratulations Constance xx

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/22/2012 9:49:00 PM

Very nice poem about love. I read this and think about how exciting young love was. Congratulations on this winning poem. Lee

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/22/2012 9:48:00 PM

Very nice poem about love. I read this and think about how exciting young love was. Congratulations on this winning poem. Lee

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/22/2012 8:56:00 AM

Nice to find you in these great winners. Congratulations Constance. Love, Joyce

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/22/2012 12:05:00 AM

Constance, Congratulations on your placement in Andrea’s “Can you Constanza? Contest.” There were so many really amazing entries we had a very difficult time deciding. We had to go by who followed the form best, and whose poem was most creative. I spent 4 and half hours going over the poems and Andrea, a lot longer. Thank you so much for your wonderful entry Mahalo, Connie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/21/2012 11:37:00 PM

MANY CONGRATS CONSTANCE MY DEAR FRIEND FOR A STUNNING WRITE AND STELLAR WIN .. MOST DELIGHTFUL LINES ENVELOPE THE READER INTO SHEER BEAUTY .. HOPE U R WELL LUV .. MISS U ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2012 9:07:00 PM

SO romantic, Constance. if you had rhymed the stressed syllables before the -ing suffixes, this would have been at the very top of my list because it was one of the most beautiful poems in the contest. Congratulations. Connie and I enjoyed it very much.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/27/2012 12:00:00 AM

captivatingly beautiful .. romantic and laced with truest love .. u did a superb job on this form and chose a theme close to my own heart Constance.. best wishes luv..hope we can chat very soon ..

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/26/2012 7:05:00 PM

You've created a wonderful Constanza my friend, it is very beautiful! I truly love the dynamics of your poem, each and every line has life to it! What a significant delight this poem really is, I love it! Great Work!! Oh by the way, in the title you must have the word Constanza somewhere in it! Just helping you out so you won't get disqualified for it!