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My Heart's Empty Bottle

As my heart gazes it is like an empty bottle With a message that I seek But only in my dreams will I receive Sharks swim below as I sing to myself As I look I see an angel landing Far from out of my reach From a long journey from the heavens Tired and weak Beaten down on the way to heaven As life has been beat down Worn out and tired Dumb and useless without love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/12/2016 11:20:00 AM
Victoria Andrus, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/21/2015 4:38:00 PM
VICTORIA, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"
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Date: 1/24/2011 3:48:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Victoria. Please continue to write you will do very well. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2011 7:44:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing... check out our contests too.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 1/23/2011 2:29:00 AM
12 years old? She has amazing talent. That is about the age I was, when I started writing. :) This poem shows so much emotion. I hope to see more of her work on here. Take care & Keep writing. <3 Kaci Jo
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Date: 1/22/2011 3:30:00 PM
This poem was written by my 12 year old daughter that I adopted 5 years ago through Child Protective Services.
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Date: 1/22/2011 3:19:00 PM
Interesting but sad work..Sara
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Date: 1/22/2011 2:38:00 PM
Nice one, Victoria!
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