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My Heart, You Hold--Lyric

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~ From the pleasure of your soul, I glow Through moonlight... a kiss, a gaze can't forego And dawn approaches upon us to bring Soft caress of air into me shall blow Where love's movement rises, we cling...we cling. Chorus: Dearest , somehow my fervent life you hold Till this heart in abandon takes a leap, Then tame me now, let all demands unfold Tame me now within an affection deep. ~ We relish all seasons' wonder so sweet, Enchanting our eve its heavenly treat-- That pulses heat on as moans of breath dive Warmer a slow dance, my yearning complete Tender the gaze, the kiss… our joys replete. Songwriter's Challenge Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton 6/27/2020

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Date: 8/13/2020 12:15:00 PM
This is a breathtaking write Nette - absolutely romantic,a touch of sensuousness and awesome imagination. Congratulations on your win Nette, Hope you are keeping well. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/4/2020 9:59:00 AM
This is a deeply beautiful poem Nette.
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Date: 7/5/2020 7:42:00 AM
I love your magical lyric Nette! This is so gorgeous in imagery and emotions. Congratulations on your win :) Keep writing and inspiring! Blessings and love :)
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Date: 6/30/2020 1:26:00 PM
Congrats to win on your lovely lyric. Blessing
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Date: 6/30/2020 11:56:00 AM
A beautiful lyric Nette, congrats on a nice win!
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Date: 6/28/2020 6:53:00 AM
This is, if such a thing exists, almost a hymn of the sensual. Beautifully written, Nette.
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Date: 6/28/2020 6:43:00 AM
Tender, romantic--wonderfully done, Nette--an ode to love!
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Date: 6/27/2020 6:09:00 PM
You are a wonderful songwriter Nettie. I hope this will not be your last song.
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Date: 6/27/2020 5:58:00 PM
Beautiful lyrics Nette, a very romantic piece. Good luck in the contest Tom
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