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My Heart Whispers

The first time I saw you, my heart whispered In front of you stands someone very special One that you will love, cherish and adore Until you breathe your very last breath She gives you that feeling bards write about Of total commitment, total devotion, total love How fortunate can one man be If you will be my friend, my lover, my confidante I promise to be yours forever and evermore My heart whispers to me as I write This woman that stands before you is THE one You've been waiting for all your life Cherish the moment! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Russell Sivey

Date: 12/15/2014 6:22:00 AM

Hey there my friend, this is such a romantic write, I am very impressed Jack! You are a hopeless romantic at heart aren't you old buddy! I really enjoyed reading this grandiose poem this morning! What a fabulous piece, such a glamorous write! Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/15/2014 7:33:00 AM

HEEEE'SSSS BBBBAAACCCKKK!!! Welcome, my good friend Russell! As always, you spread sunshine and happiness... thank you my good buddy! Cheers, Jack

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2014 12:45:00 PM

aww soooo romantic Jack:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/14/2014 1:39:00 PM

The old gut's still got it, eh!!! LOL Thanks sis! XXX

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/14/2014 10:38:00 AM

You hear that Hubby! Love's in the air! And it's not Spring yet! What do you mean Spring sprung a long time ago? We're NOT too old for a little mojo... Er... Perhaps you're right. We do have a few too many prying eyes. And who keeps sneaking into the bedromm to open the drapes! I am NOT going to be another UTube video for those squirrels! Dragon! PUT the Camera DOWN! PS. The last UTube video was of me getting off the couch... The caption was 'The leviathan rises'! Honestly Dragon stop laughing!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/14/2014 10:42:00 AM

You are sumpting else... I just haven't figured out what yet!!! LOL XXX

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/14/2014 10:12:00 AM

Sooo Romantic!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/15/2014 7:30:00 AM

Don't know what happened... I wasn't finished! My dearest Charmaine, you are LOVE, everyone here on the Soup knows that! When you comment on one of my poems, I feel I've written something special my loving friend! To know you is an honour dear friend! Santa XXXX

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/15/2014 7:26:00 AM

My dearest Charma

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/14/2014 2:46:00 PM

Old is only a word people invented..What we are and who we are is defined through the heart.Happy Christmas dear Santa..You re the best Santa of the world blessing us with the gift of love : )

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/14/2014 10:31:00 AM

Not too bad for an old grandpa, eh!!! LOL Merry Christmas my love XXX

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/14/2014 9:43:00 AM

Oh ho Jack a sweet romantic ! Can hear whispers of ur heart so clear! God bless!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/14/2014 9:49:00 AM

Had to take off my jester hat for this one! LOL XXX

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/14/2014 7:28:00 AM

You are such a romantic, Kenny. This is one of your best....in the romantic category. Hugs

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/14/2014 7:50:00 AM

My dear dear Miss Boop! You exude sweetness... thanks a whole big bunch!!! Hope all is well with you dear friend! Love and huggsies, Kenneth! XXX