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My Heart Sings

You caused my lonely heart to sing Oh such happiness that you bring I knew instantly I wasn't a play thing You said you wanted more than a fling Now I'm smiling as I wear your ring Inspired By The Five Line Contest 10-4-16 Alexis Y

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/7/2016 3:04:00 PM

Very romantic poem, Alexis. You got my heart singing w/this one. Well done, lady. Love always.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2016 8:54:00 AM

a GREAT five lines in monorhyme, Alexis. I enjoyed this.

Carol B.

Date: 11/6/2016 12:20:00 AM

"Now I'm smiling as I wear your ring" Brought a smile to my face as I know that feeling and the joy it brings :) Great poem :)

Lilly Davis

Date: 11/5/2016 9:03:00 AM

Hey Alexis, I sent you some poetry soup mail If you care :D

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/5/2016 9:11:00 AM

Hi Ali, I just replied to your soup mail. I will visit you soon:-) Alexis

Paloma P

Date: 11/5/2016 7:14:00 AM

Smiling @ happy endings. :) Goo luck Alexis!

Xuefeng Pan

Date: 11/5/2016 5:52:00 AM

Nothing could stop you from being happy! Go ahead Alexis!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/4/2016 10:50:00 PM

And I'm smiling as I read this sweet write! So simple and again - so sweet. Best of luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/4/2016 10:06:00 PM

So Sweet!!! :)

Patrice Trice Jackson

Date: 11/4/2016 9:40:00 PM

Beautiful

White Wolf

Date: 11/4/2016 9:33:00 PM

And you made it look so easy! Well done Alexis and good luck