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My Heart Betrayed Me

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I spend each wakeful night in search of evasive sleep. An unwelcomed vigil denies me peaceful rest. I've need to bury his haunting specter somewhere deep; entombing forever my perpetual uninvited guest. Close my weary eyes, appears the vision of his face. His smile plays over me in sweet unbridled song. If I could rip out my eyes as easily as tattering lace, Would insomnolence not taunt me all night long? How long must I remain my heart's shackled possession? Will this nocturnal torment never reach an end? No response have I heard to either of these questions. My heart is not content to simply call him, "friend." I've foolishly assigned myself a Herculean task, To believe from its grasp, my heart will set me free. I'm paying the steepest price that love alone can ask. Why, treacherous heart, why have you betrayed me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/21/2016 7:38:00 PM
Very emotionally powerful poem, Lin. A Souper 7. Such passion, such resolve. The mindset of a romantic soul. I loved it so! I will reply to your comments in "Lost Love Divined." I need no accolades for a gift God gave me. I knew I had it since I was a little boy. I just like to share it w/others, and give encouragement to kindred spirits like us. We are not alone. We all have the same gift, but each of us expresses it in our own unique voice/style. I love yours. Much love to you. RW
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Date: 11/5/2015 10:21:00 AM
Oh, the heart. Great love and great betrayals come from it, sometimes at the same time. I felt your pain in this one and can relate.
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Date: 11/5/2015 10:32:00 AM
I thought I'd see you here. Keep writing about it... spill your sorrow and anger on paper...it really does help.
Date: 11/4/2015 7:56:00 AM
This is a stunning write! Your choice of words is excellent and a beautiful, real and painful subject! A 7!
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Date: 11/4/2015 10:04:00 AM
Hello, Anna...I appreciate you compliments and your generous rating. I find it eases the pain... just a little, to put my sorrow, anger, etc...on paper.
Date: 11/4/2015 7:36:00 AM
The fragile heart what a pain it can be.
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Date: 11/4/2015 10:02:00 AM
Hi, Gabriel...no kidding. Thanks for reading this one.

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