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My Heart

my heart has been broken by common circumstance looking this way instead of that blindsided by an idea that never made it back from a night of glorious loving when you told me it would last dancing in the valley of rhymes naked blinded scintered by a sun that never set I buried the answer in a hollow question carved a path you couldn’t follow aimed towards a vein punctured in perpetuity while circumstance snuck up behind me and kicked me in the ass.

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Date: 8/7/2017 8:50:00 AM
Excellent Joseph, the ending was great and I especially love the line "I buried the answer in a hollow question" ~ chilling.
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Joseph Adler
Date: 8/7/2017 4:40:00 PM
thank you Phil Have read some of your poems. I liked the mountain form. Im a great fan of cummings. Keep it coming.

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