My Heart

My heart is A flightless feathered creature Doomed to a life grounded, Though never crestfallen, For it has found the sky in your eyes.

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Date: 1/13/2017 11:57:00 AM

Congrats on your great poem Sarah! :-)

Date: 1/11/2017 2:53:00 AM

That is beautiful, Sarah. Congratulations on your win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann

Date: 1/10/2017 7:18:00 PM

Lovely poem, Sarah. Congratulations on your podium win. Sandra

Date: 1/10/2017 6:35:00 PM

Coming back with congrats once again. Agnes

Date: 11/8/2016 12:11:00 PM

Dear Sarah, lovely write,grounded heart so full of love, Congratulations on top win!//love,Anu:)

Date: 11/5/2016 5:40:00 PM

Congratulations. Very nice!

Date: 11/5/2016 12:00:00 PM

congratulations on your lovely winner. Love, Joyce

Date: 11/5/2016 10:34:00 AM

A 7 for your lovely, WINNING poem, Sarah! Janice

Date: 11/5/2016 8:01:00 AM

What a lovely image, Sarah. Congrats on your win. Agnes

Date: 11/5/2016 3:39:00 AM

Sooooooooooo Beautiful, Sarah. Many congrats on your fine win. Lainey

Date: 10/12/2016 10:04:00 AM

Congratulations, Sarah! Well done! ...Fran