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maybe you can learn to love me but i don't know how i feel about waiting around to see i might be in love with a ghost stuck on a distant memory of how love's supposed to be i'm waiting for the other shoe to drop yet all the while feeling safe that the shots have not been called i hover in no man's land it feels surreal that somehow time seems stalled and stuck on pause Submitted on January 19, 2023 for BRIAN STRAND CONTEST NO.1172 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~THE RIGHT TIME~ 2023 AP: 1st place 2022 Posted on December 11, 2022

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Date: 12/12/2022 12:47:00 AM
The poem is really very good; the waiting, not so much. Elizabeth
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/12/2022 6:01:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Elizabeth ~
Date: 12/11/2022 9:29:00 PM
Painful time, Line, but you have the strength to get through:)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/12/2022 6:02:00 AM
Thanks, Jo. Much appreciated ~

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