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My Haiku

Overwhelming pain How can I just walk away? With my head held high

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/29/2012 11:09:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Margarita. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

E.J. Smith

Date: 1/29/2012 10:29:00 AM

Simple, but very clear. Could you put the "?" after "high"? Seems it would make the point even more so...anyway, enjoyed by me.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2012 10:36:00 PM

Margarita, it's hard to walk with head high.. but, you can do it... enjoyed stopping by to read your poem..pd