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My Greatest Fear

"The only thing I am afraid of is fear . . . " Arthur Wellesley, 1831 ______________ Though young, I fly on wings of time- Life a parenthesis sublime. Haunted, I fear death, taking my last breathe. All fear death, the last chime. On the ragged edge of this life- Will I be full of dread and strife? Oh, daunting suspense! Is Heaven immense? When past tense, gone from life. Will my beloved be above? Will I see my child and true love? Are my pets waiting? Oh, a thought aching, that nothing, is above! _____________________ September 29, 2016 Verse/My Greatest Fear Copyright Protected, ID 834437 Entered in the contest, Your Worst Fear, Sponsor, Lewis Raynes Second Place

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Darren White

Date: 10/12/2016 10:08:00 PM

Sitting here quietly reading your poem, congratulations is perhaps not the right word to use here, but it is a beautiful poem...

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2016 12:33:00 PM

many congrats Constance I am sure you will be reunited with your loved ones my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/12/2016 8:45:00 AM

An eerie yet emotional piece.... Congrats BW, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)

Lewis Raynes

Date: 10/11/2016 8:03:00 PM

That whole idea is delightfully scary. loved this, congratulations on ur win

Tom Arnone

Date: 10/1/2016 10:45:00 PM

Beautiful, B. W. If there is nothing, at least it is nothing for all and all for nothing -- but, I think there is ... something. ;-)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/30/2016 4:38:00 PM

...and some only fear spiders. How sad our lives when stricken by horror. How horrific the complex fears it brings. I can only hope and pray that every day (if even as tiny as a grain of salt) some joy slowly filters the doubts that cloud bright rays of light and eventually reveal a sun whole again. Excellent write. A Fav.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/30/2016 4:03:00 AM

Be not afraid, but Have faith, Constance:) nice honest poem:)

White Wolf

Date: 9/29/2016 9:41:00 PM

I actually died once in hospital, and the vision I saw was beautiful, Like being in a vibrant pool of colours and energy, so I no longer fear death. I don't know about a god but there was a beautiful woman standing in front of me. You are very talented, and inspiring, thank you for that. /|\

Keith Osborne

Date: 9/29/2016 9:04:00 PM

Beautiful, yet, haunting, with a splash of wonderment. I really enjoyed this style. It looks like a lot of fun to compose. You seem well refined in your craft.

Lu Loo

Date: 9/29/2016 8:54:00 PM

I have never seen this form! I love it! Very emotional fear- it's one I quite often think of...good luck :)-luloo