My Grand Maa

my grand ma How would I forget 23th the day my grand mother Loose her breath Suddenly call I get About my dear ones death My sis said That my grand ma is dead My ear stop to hear And my brain was in fear I wish everything was wrong But my grandmother had gone She had said bye And tears came in our eye We tend to cast The beauty of her past We may stop cry But our tears will never dry She will live in our heart Never a part My grand ma was Best all from rest……..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2016 11:58:00 AM

bir, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2016 11:51:00 AM

bir, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 2:55:00 PM

SAHIL, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/23/2010 12:23:00 PM

This is an excellent poem. By the way, I am sorry to hear about the airplane accident. Welcome to poetry Soup. Blessings, Joseph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/14/2010 4:10:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sahil. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Keep writing it can help with the pain of loss. Love, Carol

Anthony Nutter

Date: 5/13/2010 5:18:00 PM

Worse kind of call to get, it seems to always come at night.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2010 5:13:00 PM

very emotional, one will endure so much sadness over a loss like the one you for tell, a very difficult loss. the emotions will heal slowly, enjoyed the nice dedication to your grandma,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2010 4:51:00 PM

Great tribute to your grandmother..Sorry about your loss...Our grandparents can very important in our lives...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara