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My Goodbye Letter

My Love, We had a great life of bliss together, embracing each other during winter, chasing butterflies in summer, watching trees as they shed off their leaves during autumn, as we held each other tightly on a couch, and tasting rain together in spring…..same things season after season. Having taken me for granted, you have cut off the roots of my joy; you have created a black-hole deep in my heart. I thought we were like light and bright, but then, I realized you were using me like a bridge to the one whose kiss was softer; whose embrace was more sensual. I wish you all the happiness in the world, as I return to the stars……hopefully never to return to this cold world again. Your photo will be the last thing that I see. Yours truthful, Faded Love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/20/2016 12:19:00 AM
Teddy, Congratulations on your awesome, somewhat angry win. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/16/2016 8:51:00 AM
Hi Teddy, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/14/2016 10:59:00 AM
teddy, congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting this Angry Topic. Have a nice day **SKAT**
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/14/2016 4:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Skat!!! *^_^* <3 Have a lovely day too!!! ;-)
Date: 12/6/2015 12:13:00 PM
I have read through half a dozen of your poems tonight, Teddy...All good stuff! This one is certainly no exception - Nicely penned! My best regards! :) john
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/14/2016 4:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Ian, it's such an honor to hear those words from you :-) I have a poetry book, "Milky Way in Words", available in book country. This poem is part of the book!! ;-)
Date: 11/4/2014 12:05:00 AM
Thats an emotional letter Teddy but love your writing
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/4/2014 1:28:00 AM
Thank you Juliet! ^_^
Date: 4/9/2014 12:18:00 PM
TEDDY, Thank you so much, for the support.... A forever poetry soup joy, when congratulating all contest winners.... Enjoy your day... Forever ~LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/10/2014 3:02:00 AM
Thanks for your sweet and kind words Linda! We all have made poetrysoup to be great as it is today! Much Love, Teddy. ^_^ <3 <3 <3

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