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My Girl With Raven Hair

Residing in our dreams before years we had not met opening life's hidden door hearts that had not yet connected to one another hearts being intertwined emotions of a lover secrets of our minds sharing now of present life thoughts of what could be having shared sorrows strife your my destiny calling through the ages no other can compare loving past all stages my girl with raven hair

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Date: 3/16/2010 1:46:00 PM
Aww. Cute poem. I loved the first stanza esp and it's got a lovely flow. Extra points for using my name too, haha. But one thing, shouldn't it be "you're"?? just saying :)
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