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My Gift Is Love

That word Love, that surpasses all the eternal flame, you hold in your hand.. My darling my gift to you, thousand veils of light passions of our minds, in heaven so true where God's counsel will stand, is love, more love and laid on a path laid bare, is my hand to yours from the eyes of the heart, and there will be no comparing or timeless forms of eternal unquestionable loving souls as inborn from the passion from heaven.. Dear darling, My gift to you is ever endearing forbearing lovely loving....LOVE... Brooke Dylan 2014

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Date: 5/22/2014 6:17:00 AM
And the greatest of these is love. Well done my friend.
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Date: 5/18/2014 6:40:00 PM
love is a beautiful thing and your poem is just that. Great words Brooke :)
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Date: 5/18/2014 5:07:00 PM
Hi Brooke, My friend~ This is very touching and it certainly speaks to all of us. given and measured here in this write. Thank you for sharing this write with us here. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/18/2014 5:48:00 PM
love and peace Dear Deborah. I am sending prayers your way.. hugs
Date: 5/18/2014 4:04:00 PM
your writing has given me a visual of a bride and groom, expressing their vows, beautiful wording, you have combined both your emotion and and expression into one.
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Date: 5/18/2014 3:12:00 PM
beautiful write : )
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/18/2014 3:13:00 PM
Thank you Jack
Date: 5/18/2014 2:16:00 PM
Heaven, We Won't Need The Type Of Love These Mortal Fleshly Shells, Yearn For Here Upon Planet Earth ? Our Joy Shall Be Complete With Cups Thus Running Over....Babylon, Will Just Have To Keep Such Minute Matters Unto Itself! Yet, Poetically Speaking As In Human Terms; Tis Quite A Lovely Little Painting: Super Ku's...Love, Jeremy *
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/18/2014 2:26:00 PM
HA HA... JEREMY you are so cute..lol
Date: 5/18/2014 1:54:00 PM
- There is nothing greater than LOVE - A beautiful poem, Brooke! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/18/2014 2:26:00 PM
Thank you Dear Anne..

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