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My Gashes

I wrote our names on a leaf and sent it with the wind until September return.... As the trees throw there leaves ours will never fall or burn Like sun shines the empty lonely sky you shine into my soul When earth doesn't stand still you hold my hand and never let me fall Like the stars needs their moon to light up the night I need you to light up my path , to light up my world To be the one who shatters my fears and holds me tight when life gets so empty , lonely and cold Desert ain't a desert with no sand Neither my gashes can be healed without a touch of your warm , soft hand

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Date: 1/25/2016 3:10:00 AM
lovely write Dalia...beautiful
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/25/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thanks dear , I'm glad u liked it, hugs / / :)
Date: 1/8/2016 1:37:00 AM
beautiful poem...a 7
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/8/2016 7:57:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend for ur lovely comment and ur delightful visit , hugs / / :)
Date: 1/6/2016 9:11:00 PM
the journey of Love is Eternal....with the passion of an inferno....fulfilling the deepest of desires....melting like ice in the fire....leaving only happiness and hope....that way, we will forever cope....;)
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/6/2016 9:15:00 PM
Thank you my friend for ur delightful words , sure it means alot for me.....Happy by ur lovely , sweet visit....hugs / / :)
Date: 1/6/2016 3:52:00 PM
Interesting long lines... '...you shine into my soul,' '...without a touch of your warm, soft hand,' gorgeous phrasing and imagery! Well done dalia! Best wishes, Keith
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/6/2016 3:54:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend for ur kind and delightful words , much appreciated, hugs / / :)
Date: 1/5/2016 9:24:00 PM
There is something so sweet and young in a heart that would wish with leaves this way Dalia...you have such a native, natural way with sharing your wishes with the world around you, its so beautiful to me. "As the trees throw their leafs ours will never fall or burn..." such resolute love woman, such calm foresight you possess...J.A.B.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/5/2016 9:32:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear for ur supportive words and your precious , mesmerizing words , I'm truly honored by ur sweet lovely comment and by ur delightful visit my friend , many thanks and hugs / / :)

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