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My Garden Spinner

The first time it was missing parts And so it was returned. Today, with the replacement, well, The lesson had been learned. So I followed the directions And, with patience and a bit Of assistance from my husband, I assembled all of it. The hardest part was getting it To stand up in the soil. The ground is very rocky; From some tries it did recoil. But finally, my spinner is Secured out on the yard. When I am on my porch, it is The first thing I regard. It took a little effort But I told my friend who sent it That it really makes me happy And I hope she knows I meant it.

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Date: 5/5/2024 12:47:00 PM
Too bad about the missing parts. I'm happy that it is working to give you entertainment. This is a sweet poem of everyday life.
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Date: 5/4/2024 6:56:00 PM
i bought one ten years ago, but never used it, your have original poems, enjoyed your creativity yann
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