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My Funny Valentine

Glasses tinkle and there's a steady murmur of conversation as the club quickly fills to near capacity. He sits nursing his vodka tonic, waiting for the show to begin. The house lights dim and the stage is spot-lit as the musicians take their places. Chatter modulates to rapt attention as the first notes drift into the air. The band has chosen a ballad, 'My Funny Valentine' and the familiar strains bring claps of recognition from the audience. He closes his eyes to concentrate on the music, pleased they are playing her favorite tune. The moment is so powerful she is right there with him, swaying to the rhythm, nestled in his arms, light as a feather. It's a long, gentle rendition, almost twelve minutes. The band takes solos, drawing every nuance from the old standard, their improvisations bold and fresh. As they return to the melody the tune gradually dissolves into silence. The patrons respond with sustained applause. When he opens his eyes he finds himself surrounded by dancers, lovers in each others' arms, cradled in his own embrace.

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Date: 4/1/2016 10:21:00 PM
Liked this, and the song you choose for the poem great!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/3/2016 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Arthur... your remarks are much appreciated. Keith
Date: 3/31/2016 1:12:00 PM
Presentation is very nice.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/3/2016 11:58:00 AM
Thanks so much Manmath... Best wishes, Keith
Date: 3/30/2016 7:12:00 PM
A lovely and dreamy prose, soothingly written to caress the senses with warm memories brought on by a song. I like the descriptive lines that made the scene (and sounds) alive in the mind, and the perfect ending lines. Wonderful feeling.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/3/2016 12:00:00 PM
Many thanks Cynthia! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 3/30/2016 4:46:00 PM
i can picture the scene perfectly, keith! you've created the mood quite brilliantly...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 3/30/2016 5:13:00 PM
Thank you Ilene... much appreciated. Keith
Date: 3/30/2016 3:39:00 PM
beautiful:)
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 3/30/2016 5:13:00 PM
Thanks PDA! much appreciated. Keith

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