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My Frozen Fountain of Youth

went to VT for the weekend had a blast and pet the horses had nothing to worry for a few didn't think about work or school time hoped to come home to write this rhyme 'cause I have something to share.. My fountain of youth is frozen for for now its a beautiful site I really wish you could be there I hope that tonight my fountain is alright the snow has built a sheet I really wish you could be there - with me man made but made so well so close you can't tell --Writer's note-- but forever now I will remember the time I went to my Grandpa's house, as a teenager, and saw my fountain of youth was frozen with a slight dusting of snow on top. "I really wish you could be there - with me"

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Date: 2/24/2010 6:54:00 AM
that was nice. hey, i sent you some soup mail. i hope you got it :)
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:33:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Ryan. Wishing you a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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