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My Friend Moon

She is so beautiful Everynight I see her in the sky Her light makes me bright Happiness of my heart gets to brim Old friend of mine since I am four Her white color looks like a snowflake She is a coolly That makes me a sweet cookie Her humble smile inspired me Flowed my creative pen Made me strong Took away my stress !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/5/2010 5:06:00 AM
Enjoyed this descriptive and expressive write..Sara
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Date: 7/5/2010 3:33:00 AM
very nice write ..thank you for my comments sarah x
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Date: 7/4/2010 8:10:00 AM
Such a tranquil n delightful poem!i enjoyed it thoroughly.Thanks for ur comments 2o,it feels good to be understood..and yes the person is suffering,worst of all she's losing her memory..
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