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A father with one daughter and two sons; a mother with four daughters of her own - They came together years ago and bought what would become my fondest childhood home. A sharply inclined driveway much too narrow for all of us to pile out of our car without becoming crammed beside the house led to a small garage set back quite far. The house, blue-grey, two-story, had a porch we children rarely used, but still Mom swept it all the time, for she was such a clean freak, and though our house was old, it was well-kept! Set on a downward slope, there was a woods behind the back yard, steep and filled with trees. In winter, we’d do sledding and could skate upon its little pond when it would freeze. In summer, we played war where brush and weeds grew wild, or we’d play kickball down the street. Badminton we would play in our back yard or hose each other in the summer heat. All over our small city we’d ride bikes, play at the park or buy treats at the store. Then late at night, with Mom and Dad asleep, we’d eat our snacks behind our bedroom door. We loved to stay up late to joke and talk upstairs where we shared bedrooms not too big, Dad yelling up the stairs at us to stop. We’d giggle, for we didn’t give a fig! Downstairs and at the front of that old house, our parents slept next to the living room, which led behind a side door to the cellar with parts of it as creepy as a tomb! A ping pong table Dad set up down there, a game that gave us hours and hours of fun. A make-shift shower too, Dad put down there. It was the thing that most of us would shun! Each night would find us in the living room, where we would gather as a family. But when our dad put on his boring shows, we’d cram inside our brothers’ room for TV! The dining room next to the living room had mirrors and a table where we went to play monopoly or have nice dinners, but for suppers, to the kitchen we were sent. Our kitchen was the back room of the house. So small it was. The bathroom was right next to it, and ten of us were forced to share it! That house design still leaves us so perplexed! The best thing for me happened in that kitchen when late at night, my mom or Dale and I would simply talk. My stepbrother, so sweet, would be the first of all of us to die. We’d scattered, leaving home for school, and he was taken from us all those years ago. Our step dad passed away two decades later. Mom sold the house; new owners let it go. That poor house of my childhood and my teens is now in disrepair; so says my mother. But in the cemetery down the street there rests in peace nearby it - my dear brother. Written 9/17/2015

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Date: 10/22/2015 4:53:00 PM
Congrats for your win x well written x Wendy
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Date: 10/22/2015 1:15:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
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Date: 10/22/2015 12:02:00 AM
Andrea, this is a beautiful piece about your childhood home. Great imagery! A "BIG congratulations on your 1st place win it was well deserved:-)Alexis
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Date: 10/18/2015 4:59:00 PM
Lovely write about your childhood home, Andrea. Your poetic descriptions are amazing. Congrats on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/18/2015 9:54:00 AM
I love your poem, and the heartfelt nostalgia. So many bittersweet memories are wrapped up in the places we've grown up. But we never forget!
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Date: 10/18/2015 8:33:00 AM
Hi, Andrea. It's always a joy to see your name on the top of the winners list! This seems the longest poem you have ever written. I can feel the joy of your childhood days in that old house with your caring family, and the sadness of having lost your brother. Your talent makes you shine as always. Keep up the great work. Thanks for sharing your poem. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 10/17/2015 11:19:00 PM
Congrats Andrea! Reading about your house was like having grown up with you! Love, Balveen
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Date: 10/17/2015 11:04:00 PM
Great poem--skillfully and soulfully written! Congratulations Janice
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Date: 10/17/2015 6:52:00 PM
Andrea - You tore up the score board these past few days! Its tough loving you, one has to think of so many ways to say, congratulations! All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 10/17/2015 6:45:00 PM
Back to give you congratulations on your top win with this wonderful poem Andrea.
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:06:00 PM
Congratulations.....if they start giving out trophies for first place winners you'll have to build a bigger home.......Congrats Congrats....Congrats....
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:03:00 PM
Andrea another win go girl lol. Congratulations Andrea on your win!!!!!!!!
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Date: 10/17/2015 4:36:00 PM
I loved this the first time i read it Andrea many congrats on your top spot - you are flying high my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/29/2015 12:10:00 AM
An interesting tale, well written. Julia, :)
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:25:00 AM
This is so sweet and touching, bringing back childhood memories to me, Andrea. Wonderful poem :)
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Date: 9/22/2015 10:41:00 AM
Andrea, this is such a beautiful tribute to your family home and to your brother. You described the home so well, I felt like I was there.
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Date: 9/21/2015 2:49:00 PM
Andrea , happiness entwined with sorrow and silly me is weeping, wonderful my friend and thanks for visiting my poem, living in the moment. .
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Date: 9/21/2015 4:17:00 AM
Andie, you painted your persona here... heartfelt and puts many emotions on my face~~Olive ELoisa
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Date: 9/21/2015 3:21:00 AM
Andrea, you put your heart and soul into this moving tribute to your happy memories. PFT Please! I was drawn in with every stanza it was written so well. Bravo and I know you still miss Dale. So sorry you had to lose him so young. Hugs, Connie 7
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Date: 9/19/2015 5:21:00 PM
Seems like I have read a version of this one before..Good luck in the contest..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..My Hexasonnet was about growing old fall of our lives and winter of our lives..Winter is upon us now..Thanks for the placement ..Sara
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:47:00 PM
Good memories you share here Andrea, glad to have stepped into your early life the house photo is really quaint and peaceful looking..'
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Date: 9/19/2015 12:27:00 PM
You have shared a precious piece of your life with us and laid it bare for all to see and admire. Well written. Emile. #7
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Date: 9/19/2015 11:18:00 AM
Love it and I've written so much about it - neighborhood. This is what is the making of most of us. What we are is to a large extent the product of neighborhood. You had a great one. Love, Dave
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Date: 9/19/2015 11:05:00 AM
Fondest memories and great times were shared in this old home. It was in bad shape but has been restored, not to Mom's liking but it's no longer condemned like it was at one time. Made me cry sis.
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Date: 9/19/2015 5:00:00 AM
nothing like one's first home, andie... a sentimental, beautiful kind of reminiscing which warms my heart!.. huggs
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