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My Flower

My little flower why do you weep in your perfect existence? Did you finally relies the corruption at the ties? My silly sorrowful flower I weep with you, for your perfectly misguided existence. Why did you choose to bloom in such wretched soil? My little flower why do you weep? Why do you search for corruption when all is well it seems. Silly little flower all you will find is a heart full of ache. So I too will cry as your final bloom ends with your perfectly misguided existence. My little flower I know for whom you weep, As my tears are returned to me. Silly little flower, why do you weep for me?

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Date: 6/13/2011 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Poet Destroyer's "Best Blossom Design" contest Abby. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:35:00 AM
Great use of personification to give human emotions to your flower, Abby. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/11/2011 7:51:00 AM
my congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Abby
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Date: 6/10/2011 10:48:00 PM
great personification of this little flower, Abby. congratulationgsin PD's contest
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Date: 6/10/2011 9:05:00 PM
Congrats Abby on your terrific win in PD's contest of blooming flowers with this exceptional entry luv..enjoy sweet success...
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Date: 1/9/2011 6:50:00 PM
Very imaginatively descriptive.
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Date: 12/29/2010 5:49:00 AM
I like this alot it hits somewhere in my heart.
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Date: 12/29/2010 3:41:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Abby. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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