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My Flame

Two tonnes press on my heart, To me a great load, A weight that set the world apart The weight fell and caused a spark and it glowed! So now I am Different Completely Unique, Free from Imprisonment Completely set free. And with this heart set afire And the weight obliterated Nothing to hard,or to dire Because now my worries are exterminated! But soon one day came a traveling breeze And put out my brightened flame. But I blew on it and Said "Please- The more you try the more my heart stays the same!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/14/2013 8:43:00 AM
Greg, was hoping you would have a new one... enjoy your week...Linda
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Date: 10/9/2013 4:21:00 PM
free from imprisonment is what I long for. Greg,, and wow...what an ending. .you can't blame some one for trying. ..thanks for the visit. ..hugs...linda
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Greg Watson
Date: 10/9/2013 4:44:00 PM
No problem you are one of my faves!

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